17 November 2008 @ 03:19 am
Drabble: Unspoken  
Title: Unspoken
Author: Lilith ([info]lilithilien)
Fandom & Characters: Alles Was Zählt, Marian Öztürk
Word Count: 100 words
Rating: Gen
Disclaimer: I own absolutely nothing.
A/N: Help! I keep writing Marian! This drabble was inspired by and follows the exchange at the end of this clip, when Marian bans Roman from No. 7.


"Fuck!"

It'd been ages since he'd shattered a glass, but Marian hadn't forgotten the coppery tint of dishwater mixed with blood. Nadja rushed over, but he ignored her. She'd be sympathetic until she realised he blamed Roman.

And why shouldn't he?

"Roman, bitte."

His son siding with him over his lover should have been cause to rejoice -- such was tradition. But then he'd seen it, Deniz's silent rejoinder. "Bitte." Like they already spoke a language their own, unheeding of anyone else, soothing each other when no one else dared.

The bloody water spun down the drain, the battle lost.
 
 
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쉘리 I whip my hair like Bang Bang: awz - studio 54 sparkles and champagne[info]sdk on November 17th, 2008 03:21 am (UTC)
Oh Marian! It's not a contest, honey.

I love how you describe that moment too, because it does look like Deniz is siding with his father until you see the connection between him and Roman.

Like they already spoke a language their own, unheeding of anyone else, soothing each other when no one else dared.

*happy sigh*

Lovely drabble, hon!
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Lilith: boykiss-awz dero love[info]lilithilien on November 17th, 2008 01:37 pm (UTC)
Oh Marian! It's not a contest, honey.

*snickers* Oh, but it is! So much testosterone and nowhere to go!

Thank you so much! I loved that moment too, I hadn't even caught it the first few times around (I must've been distracted by the subtitles) and when I watched it without, I went, "Ooooooh!"

I'm watching these entirely too much. *g*
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Aldi: Dennis is tousle-smiley[info]aldiara on November 17th, 2008 04:22 am (UTC)
Oh, gorgeous! I love how perceptive Marian can be (even when he's in denial) and you've captured that so beautifully here.

The process of him coming around was one of the things the show's done really well, and this adds a lovely nuance to that scene.

His son siding with him over his lover should have been cause to rejoice -- such was tradition. But then he'd seen it, Deniz's silent rejoinder. "Bitte." Like they already spoke a language their own, unheeding of anyone else, soothing each other when no one else dared.

Yessss. So lovely. *hearts all over it* By all means, keep writing Marian! :D
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Lilith: awz-that forehead thing they do[info]lilithilien on November 17th, 2008 01:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! The unfolding of Marian's character is one of the things I think I'm enjoying most about the extended AWZ clips. I love how they built him up to be so stubborn and intolerant, and then started to chip away at it. I can't wait to see more of this.

Plus he's awfully easy on the eyes.

By all means, keep writing Marian!

Drunken weekend when he wants to see what this gay thing is all about, coming up!
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